Hi my names Zacre.I'm a yahoo member.I write my own rap lyrics.Tell me what you think.?

6 year old Jamie.Never met her father.Never came around.Wouldn't even bother.She looks just like him.She even has his smile.He looks in the picture.Now he's in denial.And Jamie's mothers trying to turn the house hold into gold.But she can't.It's too old.And Jamie's fathers popping pills.To fill agression and depression.He can quit it if he could.Just cause your in the hoood.Doesn't mean your no good.But look at this.He tries to persist.But still it all exist in his heart.His lifes falling apart.He's out selling dope.When your in the streets.Never any hope.He tried to hide the drugs.From the thugs.So he wouldn't get mugged.He wants to stop.Before the cops drop by.Seeing him high on his supply.He's trying not to lie.About the situation.Only confrontations.